Excellent write, very well done~
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

Really nice job. It seems to me that this poem could be made in a song, it had a really nice flow. Great job!

aww this poem is so sweet. keep up the good work 5/5

that was pretty good. The poem was excellent, but it was lacking..emotional backing. I didnt feel the emotions when reading it. But it was still good. And so it got 5/5
~Freak~