Excellent write, very well done~
5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

beautiful, as always. *5* i love when you say
"I will love
just like no other
treat you like the goddess you are
and never hurt you
follow what you say
and do just that"

...words that every girl hopes and wants to hear. take care and keep up the great work!
Ariane
-xXx-

Very nice poem, it's really sweet.
Good job. 5/5
--Kay--

Sweet poem bro, nicly put. Its love with a bit of morbid sickness in it. Wile I was reading it I was thinking of Slipknots Verdimillion PT2. Kick @$$ man. Keep writting

Really sweet!!! great job! 5/5
will you comment my short story? : /