Comments : Oh,dear god,give me just one more chance

  • 19 years ago

    by Roxana Madden

    very nice not all poems need to ryme you know it sounded so... sad i liked it maybe there could be a part 2......

  • 19 years ago

    by Brit

    thx, i dont know if she intended it to rhyme or not but it was sad and how would u do a part 2?