Jesse, extremely well written, very well expressed...
5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

hi jesse that is a good one. i love it good job jesse

Hey that's a really good poem, keep at it lv karli xx

Ohh my God !!!!! : (
thats too sad ! i mean ,oh i dont know what to say ! i loved this poem , God thats too sad, i think that i know the feeling,i picture myself few years to come talking juts like that ! having that memory of someone i thought is perfect !

Ohh,you are so faithful for that girl ! for that memory !

do you really think that its time to walk away with her? i mean,can you even give it a try? or its just a wish !

Peace
Rua Francis.

Hi again Jesse,

Excellent Excellent Excellent work !
i came back to drop this Quote your way (by Khalil Jibran)

"If you love somebody, let them go, for if they return, they were always yours. And if they don't, they never were "

Take care : )

Peace
Rua Francis.

:'(.......i love it

That was a good poem. Very well written. Keep up the good work.