Thanks for the comment. This is an awesome poem. Much related to me. Keep up the good work.
Becca

Im not trying to tell you what to do or anything but i think that its really good but theres one part that doesnt rhyme.(The silence is only broken
When her breathing starts to sigh
Not knowing happiness
Only of wishes to end her life)and "I THINK" that it would sound better if you change ' only of wishes to end her life' to ''only wishes to die''.... i just think it clicks better but its your poem so its your choice. but i still loved it greatly! it made a lot of sence and i understand it completely!
-thornton