Comments : Last Breath Of A Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    :S:S:S:S:S:S hun???? i v worried... are you ok??? i loved the poem but it was v sad, and i know for a fact that your dreams wont die, because i know that one of your dreams was for us to be together and be happy, and this will happen, i promise, and i really hope that when you wake up tomorow, you will feel relieved that you are alive to this day, and that we are together fighting another day, and this fight will soon end, with us as the victors, i promise you! i love you SO much hun and please take care of yourself xxxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku for ur comment hun x

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    i really liked the contrast between the shorter and longer lines, worked well. hope everythings okay and brightens up like it should

    take care always, lu -x-x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku every1 x