Comments : Emotional Disease

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    This was okay, not your best work, try to maintain a rhyme scheme because changing rhyme schemes that aren't consistant are hard to follow sometimes.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    It may have gotten a bit off topic but it was still very well written, and it wasn't wildly off topic. At least you didn't start talking about chickens haha. 5/5
    ~Freak~