How sad. But beautifully written. Well done. I like this a lot. Emotional. Chin up and smile. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot.

This is a very good start to a good piece of work but it only is just that a start. Your giving me a glimpse but the whole picture is still hazy. I would really look this over again and add you got alot more then this in the poem the emotion alone would say you got more to write on this think about it will you...