Comments : Love at First Sight (Short)

  • 19 years ago

    by Chiquitita

    Great poem!!! Thats the same way I feel bout my bf
    5/5.

  • hey i like this poem a lot too! keep up the fine work and check out some of my poems!
    xoxo,
    ~*Sarah*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Rolo

    pretty good, keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy-Rae

    I can relate to this one. I wish you luck with the rest of the poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Choti

    omg.. soooo true. wheteher it is from th guys or the girls perspective. i know exactly how it is. trust me. 5/5 please do continue. i insist.

  • 19 years ago

    by GorgeousNightmare

    I love your poem adn you might want to read it over so because on the fourth stanza you put each other together.but ther wise its beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    again, really great! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    I can feel the emotion behind the words of this poem. Another great read!

    Keep Writing
    Nici