i told you this b4, but i am rather jealous of your poem writing gift...lol...i want you to finish that other poem john! take your time...
luv ya
jo

your poem is REALLY good but know th at i rated yours please rate mine

Good poem!

WOW all i can say is WOW words cant tell how GREAT that poem was it was just amazing and i really look up to you for your talent..it is just amazing how you can write something like that..it really touched me inside.no joke...probly the best poem i have heard in a very very long time...you r going to go somewhere with this..i can feel it!!!keep writeing cause if you dont that would be a shame...you are REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! i wish i could think of the right words to reach how good this is but there is no words out there to describe it!!!!
love: heather

HelLo John

that was Really a good work mate
i love the Conversational start you had
talking to Pain as a Friend !! i think
Pain is many other Friends in this world !!!

nice work 5/5

much