Oh this is so so sad. So sorry for your loss. Its hard to lose someone you love, but you have lots of memories in your heart. Beautifully expressed. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Hey!!! Great poem, I loved it!!! Keep up the good work cuz it's awesome!!! Thanks for the comment!!! It means allot!!! I love it!!!
ღ*Lisa*ღ

O)ne of the biggest problem I have with this is your talking to the dead guy not about him. Only you and he know all the time you spent together you need to shed the light on it for me. Tell me about it you gave a nice good bye speech but nothing for me to think about or feel the love you had do you understand oh well maybe next time read Out of Sight and you will see how I explain the whole story ok tak care...