I really really liked this. Youare a good writer. Good Job!

Well done. The lines in inverted commas, and also in brackets were pulled off well in this dark life poem.
I very much enjoyed it.
My favourite part by far war:
"But when push comes to shove,
Everytime I've chosen love,
[Or a hope thereof]"
It was just a smooth running, meaningful stanza.
It was no beautiful masterpiece, but definetely a well described tale of arrogance, annoyance and hate. But tell me: is this true?

I like how you have a different approach to your writing than most of the poets on this dying site. Makes it nice to read something that a poet really takes from his/her heart and the reader is able to relate to it no matter the subject. Very nice poem and thanks for the comments on mine :)
-A