Oh thanks for you Support bro ; )

Viva La Gang
LOL

It was alright. Your rhyming seemed cliche and forced, but sometimes used words must be used. Originality is hard to find and I think some rust was washed off the iron bar in this poem. Read some of my work if you find the time.

absolutely beautiful written rua...keep them coming, and thanks for your beautiful comment, take care......clouds.~

Thank you Clouds,thank you Nada ;-)
Viva La Egypt

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

hey Rua Francis! Great poem, definately a 5. i really like this line
"Pain and Rain ,we are the same..."
awsome! keep it up and thanx for rating mine.
Godbless,
erica*

Absolutely a beautiful write, Rua. Truly a beautiful poem. hugs, love, *Ann*

aw so good!!!!!
i like your poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and i like you cus you like delta!!! tee hee

love sammi
ps keep writing
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Oh thanks mate Wendy,by the way it didn't do a favor, nice writings need to be commented on. : )

much love and Respect,
Rua Francis.

This was a pretty good poem, i liked the way you expensenceated your poem, how you were able to do that is something rare...it can be a good thing also a bad thing. Very well done.

P.S. i am doing all poems from the "Black Zodiac" the next one will be the torn prince or "the Jackel" not sure yet.

This was a really nice poem. Wonderful flow. Great job:)

So nice and simple and expressive i love itttttt