Nice Rhyme keep it up
XoXo Freakie D OxOx

Primo work there...he he i found you, but no really this awesome, way better than mine mate like u sed urs was crap ha ha not true...
well
Keep Scribblin'
catch ya
respect

Love it!! Tis great. U been added to my favourites now, lmao, cos u talk like a rapper ;). But mainly cos i love all ya poems! Keep writing!!! Luv Gem xx (thanx 4 da comment!)

Great job... 5/5