Wow, loved the twist at the ending! Excellent write!

Hey, that was a great poem! Really enjoyed reading it, and a dark but wonderful idea behind it, keep it up xxx

Again, Logan, fantastic. The climax is really interesting, but my favourite verse is:
"I signed away my conscience
And I gave away my heart
All I'm left with is this body
Which has already been torn apart". I thought that it was beautiful.

Much love,

xoxZoexox

I get this one, I'm not a moron, yay!

sorry, I love you...please, please don't do this...ever, please <3 I love you soo much Logan, I really do, I want our old times back, i want to talk to you non-stop again i love you and i miss you and I hope you're okay...please don't leave me though, I'm sorry for our long silence..I really do love you though...don't leave me, please :*( *hugs and doesn't let go ever* I love you Logan...I really do...

This was a great poem..sad and it has me worried..I hope you're okay...God, I love you <333 xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

wow very powerful. I added u to my MSN I hope that you dont mind. Take care and keep writing. ~5~

Holy my, this was a gorgeous poem. I could feel it all out in my fingertips. I was so into the poem that when I read the falling part, I got that feeling you get when you drop from somewhere high. Fantastic!

Your entire poem was excellent and the ending the best.

WOW i cant say anything else
~HazE