its well done

aww...what a sweet poem...its really nice..whoever u luv shuld feel special to get such a sweet poem

It's Short.. But The Way You've MAde A New Line For An Ending.. Really Makes the Poem Flow Really Well.. Try And Make An Even Longer Poem.. With the Same Design.. And It'll Get Top Marks. :D 5/5 Anyway.

Thats so sweet well written

Short...but sweet
good job
Oxo Laura Marie aka Sweets

Quite a sweet poem, and i can relate to ur writing. =) good structure, a good flow, 5/5
xxx

Thts cool short but sweet