Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

very excellent poem my friend:) I enjoyed reading it. thank you for the comment on my poem. I really appreciate it. and no, my mother goes not "taunt" me..my boyfriends mother does, btu that is a very long story. anyway, excellent job!! keep it up~
take care~
*Brittany*