your wording, formating and rhyming is flawless if you ever stop writing i dont know what i'll do!

BEAUTIFUL :D

I totally love it and I know how this feeling is, that's why this poems fits so beautifully into my situation.
Keep up writing this great stuff.

Sabine

awesome ur easily one of my favs on here 5/5

very good but i think it should be a love poem it seems like that to me anyways but its good 5

wow this poem was really beautiful. i love how you write them.

serenia

so sweet!!!!

GREAT!! 5/5! very well-written... please check out my poems "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever" and "My Dream Boy Dosen't Exist" please comment/vote.. thanks

Nice poem.. voted a 5 on it... Great.. hugs

wOw!!! that is GREAT!!!this is poem is so beatuiful =) good job and keep it up!! 5/5

That was a good poem