Nice Write, Very Well Expressed.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Your poems will help you process your feelings...it's hard, but you will get through it.

Nice job expressing yourself!

good...4

that was brilliant, your last lines were beautifull, amazing!! a 5 every time! your words were filled with so much meaning! keep writting!! youv got talent, never forget that! nikki x x x

There was barely any flow in this poem. Get a thesaurus learn some big word's. If this was in a published book. I'd buy it for toilet paper.