awww that is really good!!! keep up the good work. Always believe in love and trust in God!!
-Britt-

Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Very nice,i love it.

Keep writing and allways believe

<3 Erin

I really really really like that poem a lot....im thinking about giving it to my ex boyfriend. GREAT POEM.

Jenessa

GREAT poem as always Gem.. thanks 4 the comments on mine.. im lovin every poem im reading my u! keep it up!
yr girl,
~*Amanda*~

Spectacular,the feeling is there and the ending flows in nicely,i've been having trouble writing lately,trying to get my rhythm back,but this gives me a few ideas.Thnx.Respect.

Wow your Really good!!! Thanks for your comments!!! Keep it up!!

Well done! Very sweet poem! Flowed naturally~Holly

To me, this poem had a twist at the end. When I first started reading it, I thought of something else, then the end threw me off. I loved it.

Awww lol :P cute :$ yeah i used the word cute but only because ur poem was adorable :P absolutely loved it put a decent size smile on my face :)
peace
anthony

I can relate. That was a nice poem! Jpoet*

Wow amazing poem i really love it ..... coz i have secret and that poem make me feel like that way !!!!

I commented on this a while back, but just wanted to comment again and say that i TRULY relate to this now. It was amazing in flow and rhyme and just so simple. I enjoyed that the most. It had a simple point and stuck to it. It didn't jump around. You knew what you wanted to say, and you said it. Good job!
Charisma*
Comment #2

That's how it is with the guy I gave up.
I've been telling my friends that Im over him and that there's nothing there. It's really hard to do.
-Animus

Awww how nice. i know you are tired of readin this but i know how you feel cause i still really like my ex and he wont leave my mind and i cant stop writin about him and ect. but yes i know how it is. 5/5