Comments : I am the reason ...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    ooo girl, i know your life may seem overwhelming right now, but you can do this, it's a greatly writen poem, just put all your feelings into poetry and maybe that will help, wish i could help you more! always here

    ~PLP~ lil angel~ hugs & forever love~

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    This is probably one of your best poems. It just flowed so nicely while still understanding the message you laid out. Very beautifully done.
    Always much love,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by ~VaMpIrE KiSsEs~

    Hey Gurl!
    I know things may get tuff at times, but stay in there. I am always here for ya no matter what. But n e wayz, again another beautifully written poem. Your so talented! Keep up the good work!
    Love alwayz!
    ~*Mya*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    don't ever blame yourself for someone else's death. its never anyone else's fault but the one who is dead. well i mean of course unless you ran him over by a car, or stabbed him or something, but im guessing thats not the case. it's not your fault, if he truly wanted to do it, there must have been many reasons, people do not kill themselves (im guessing thats the case) over one person, i get the impression the person was cutting, if they were cutting then obviously they were upset before they met you , or before you hurt them or whatever. they already had pain. you didnt make it any worse than any other person could have. you cannnot live your life walking on eggshells around everybody for fear you are the last straw to put them over the edge. know what i mean? never blame yourself.
    ~Freak~
    p.s. oh yea lol awesome poem. i really felt it

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I AGREE WITH FREAK!!! Don't blame yourself grrl, for 1 it's not healthy (because u go thru life wondering if what u do or say is gonna make somebody kill themselves), and 2 bcuz he could've had so many other reasons. He was cutting, right? *NOTE EVERYTHING FREAK SAID* Just don't blame yourself, Kal. LUV U SO MUCH SHAWDY, //ari\\