Comments : Cannot bear

  • i love this poem, i hate how i look too so i totally relate
    read my poem "under the makeup" if you want as it's similer to this

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great poem, like always, i think that everyone has something about themself they don't like about their apperiance, no body is perfect!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Great poem, I gave it a 5. I can really relate to this. Very well written, it flows nicely. Always here if you need me.

    Much love
    ~Broken Inside~

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    so sad..wow..amazing..5/5!!!!

    much love
    shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Oh hun that's so sad. Don't feel that way I am sure you have many good qualities. It's the person you are on the inside that truly matters. You seem like a very sweet person. Don't let anyone ever bring you down. Stay Strong! Take Care of yourself! Brooke 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Well done Katie, your rhymers are always heart touching and very well written. I've to look up in dictionary, what's maim!

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.