Wow..this is really really great! I love it! I's kinda sad...but really well-written! 5/5

wow i dont know wat to say.....
its reeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaalllllly good
thers a lot of emotion
keep it up gurl

much love,
becca

so much feeling, I loved it. your a really good poet. 5/5 on this poem
love always,
Elissa

very powerful... great job.