Aww this poem's so sweet. I love how you wrote it. I hope you show the poems you write to your gf. I know it would make my day if I had a bf that could write like you. Nice work. >3jess

How sweet is this poem!!!! I loved it. As usual your poetry moves me:) Great job, Amit:)

Wow Amit that was so romantic and beautiful! She is so lucky to have such a sweet guy as yourself. You can tell just by your poems she means the world to you! Best of luck to you! Take Care! Brooke~

oh wow.. that was such a great poem it made me really think of things! and i really hope all goes well and she better say yes to something so sweet and thought like that well keep up the great work!
~SaMi~

Gorgeous, Amit. As usual. You are such a fabulous writer!! Great write!
God Bless and Take Care,
Car

wow amit...this is beautiful...this may sound selfish, but i don't care! lol...i want someone to feel this way about me!!...great poem =)...keep it up, and take care *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

p.s. sorry i haven't commented much i've been distracted and kind of busy...

WOW! such a beautiful poem Amit no gal can so No after being proposed so beautifully ;-)

Best
chavii

What else can I add that has not already been said? All I can do is try. Your talent is very nice and so is your style. The words you used expressed the emotion and (sincereness) about this piece. And thank you for your comment.
~The Unforgiven

Where have you been, Amit? We miss you... write! Lol, jk... Seriously, though. Best wishes to Nihdi and yourself! Mwah!
Take care, God Bless!
Car

so you finally asked her to marry you huh. bout time. you were too in love to remain single for long. i mean almost every poem you wrote made mention of her. so what was her answer (as if i didnt know)

awesome!!!

BEAUTIFUL.. i loved it. 5/5 gr8 it is truly a special event.. ;)

Aww, that poeeem wass soo good, i loved it. I like all of your poems, You ahve always been a good writer. Check out some of my stuff when you can :), peace

Can you propose to me like dat even if it's fake?!?! i love it NICELY DONE ur Wife must be so lucky awwww =)

Beautiful!!!

Brilliant! awesome!
well done amit. its first time that i m reading one of ur poems and really i liked it so much that i wanna read more of urs. i give 5/5.
well! she will b lucky yaar! is there someone??????
luv, bharti

Brilliant! awesome!
well done amit. its first time that i m reading one of ur poems and really i liked it so much that i wanna read more of urs. i give 5/5.
well! she will b lucky yaar! is there someone??????
luv, bharti

Aww so sweet
She must be a very lucky girl

Aww so sweet
She must be a very lucky girl

Hey, wow! There's no way she could say no! What an amazing way with words, you have. Amazing. Spectacular! A ***** (5 star) piece!