I bet you rate your own poems. That is the only way you could get a 5. Poems need a flow to them. They need more than you are giving. I'm not trying to hate or anything but any body can write better than this.

this is more like a story and apoint not fu**kin poem ok

orale, thats true eh, non of my homies got my back so i dont roll with them but some do cause those are my carnales.

o thanx :)

Wow ! dis is s0o tr0o i've gawn thro a few fakes in my days. . . fukn h8 it!
keep it upx0x

Thats very true what u wrote down eh, I'm livin throught that shit, the only homie I trust are my brothers.