Comments : Love that can never be

  • 17 years ago

    by hOlly

    the worst feeling in the world IS sitting next to the person you love KNOWING you will never have them. this is a problem i know all to well. i wish you LUCK, be strong. who knows maybe this guy is thinking the same about you?? just a thought. -Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by Piper

    i hope you get what you want cuz i know i did keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    Good poem. I liked it, but I felt like you were forcing the rhymes at the end. Try chaning the last sentence from "will never peel" to something with the word "real" in it. Peel just doesn't fit in, other than that, great poem.

    -Ice

  • 17 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    i liked it a lot, and i know how that feels :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey another great piece from you. Keep it up! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by NoPatience

    wow. this is exactly how i felt about my ex until he proved me wrong and came back 2 me. (this is happening right now) i loved the poem. could use some work tho. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Carmen

    omg, that sounds so like me! awesome job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I love it .. awesome job 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mira Ukrainetz

    Wow! thats scrary!!!its the exact way i feel about this guy!!freaky...well great poem! keep up the good work!