I quite like the *cant think of word*,erm the,oh darn it,its good,I like the symbolism as well.Peowpeow,cya @ skool,u kno I frikin will LOL.:P

Different, it really deserved a 5/5

A great poem. The metaphors you've used are excellent.
Love always,
Kelly

woot rock on with your frock on i need to write more lolz hahahaha eric is sex

This is deep man, i like. yes but um r u talking bout smoking?