it just gets better with every one i read! plz keep writing! u are so talented! 5/5

Wow, great poem. I thought it went together smoothly. Keep writeing,I hope you don't mind being on my favorites

yeah, I really can't believe you're only 15
really good poem
and thanks for your comment on mine
hope you keep writing you're really great
xx

its a good poem i like it it is sad but in a way happy to me

Wow, I am like umm wow I dont know what to say. This poem is so awesome. I love how you wrote it. It went together extremely well. <3333