Comments : The death of my love

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    wow, i have no clue how you come up with these but keep doing it! lol good job once again!

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Awesome. That was wicked awesome. I really liked this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    great poem, great writing.. I don't know it might be just me.. but this verse dosn't sound right....

    i didn’t ask for this
    i wasn’t prepared for your death
    and even though i threw the final blow
    the fact remains that you killed my soul

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Wow so emotional and amazingly written

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    This poem gave me chills! Excellent write! I love that it flowed so nicely without a rhyme...that can be difficult to do some times. I love the ending as you say he been buried along with your heart. Clever....Perfect!! :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    hmm i liked this one too...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    and even though i threw the final blow
    the fact remains that you killed my soul

    those were some powerful words there...brilliant, i cant stop reading these wonderful poems!
    <3