It was all intentional, thank you for the feedback :)

"I skim along each line and carved bend, looking for

Imperfections. Yet there are none."

Those few lines really caught me...and made me read the poem quite a few times. A very intriguing poem I must say. It definitly catches the attention of the reader. Also,

"You would hold me if I asked."

Wow, that fits the picture I got of this poem so well. Wonderful. This poem was very enjoyable and well written, keep writing.
Dorotea

Wow! Terrific poem Very deep. I loved it. It was sad too. Great job:)