That is a beautiful poem, expressive, This person is so lucky to have you loving them, I hope they realize that, very well done, keep it up, you are a brilliant poet.

excellent poem, really catchy beginning and wonderful piece all together!

~PLP~ lil slam~

I was just feeling like this... I do miss my boyfriend ;_; Perfect way of catching the heartache, dear <333 5/5

Beautiful poem, well done, keep it up

Graham

xxx