Boy, I long for you,
I long for you so bad,
But thats in the past,
that is what I had.

<in this verse in the last line i would maybe change it to that's what I had, it makes the line read more smoothly>

But another good one from you, i really like that you can experience and reflect on these emotions through urpoems, u get the message across nicely

Pimp ass poem 4/5