Comments : To an unknown god

  • 18 years ago

    by erotema

    "reckless boy" = icarus
    icarus, zeus = paganism
    the Sun = christianity

    the title comes from the bible (acts 17:23)

    the new god in the poem is a mirror:
    1. mirror reflects light of faith
    2. mirror promotes egoism

  • 18 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Great poem! Great thing to write about too! Very well written and deep! Great job!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    There isn't possibly one thing I could critique; and honestly, this comes as no surprise to me.

    5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Very well put amazing poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Great wording you painted a very cool piucture. If you get time check out any of my featured poems and vote and comment...

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good poem!! 5/5! keep up the awsoem work.. please check out my poem "My dream boy dosen't exist" please comment/vote.. thanks a lot.. hugs

  • 17 years ago

    by Derf K

    All i can say is that it wasn't what I expected - but am surely not disappointed.