wow! its great i cn reali realiate 2 it aswell! keep it up! ur ace! xxx

wow..first poem..nice!

i agree for a first poem its f*king awsome well done! xox fallen

wow thats amazing, an u first poem too! im impressed

ellie xxx

This is an amazing first poem... i love it... just like i love all of your poems..

beautifully written and flow was great.

5/5