really cool poem :)

Wow...this is actually really sad..Isn't it weird how you can luv someone so much..and they don't even know you are there..Oh well...I can relate to this poem..It's an amazing poem!! Keep your head up..:o)
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Shannon

flawless poem, stunning! so beautiful yet so sad. loved the verse

To you I'm only a tree,
Standing beside you in a wood,
It's not as if you would grow next to me,
If you could choose where you stood

amazing. chin up :)

take care always, lu -x-x-x-

thats really sweet, i really hope sumthin happens for u to try to make a lil converstaion with him to show ur interested it can't hurt :) xox sam

aw hunni that was apsolutely amazing, really captivating but so sad. it sounds like u feeling really hopeless but i promise it wil work out, an no matta wat, my shoulders always here for you to cry on

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx *endess hugs*

oopsie i meant endless

I dunno if i've commented ont his oen b4 but i love it u pin point all feelings from a certain perspective xox fallen

Aw this is sad..*tear... but i enjoyed reading it... i've felt invisible before too... it sucks...

but great poem.5/5