Hey, really good poem, I loved the way there was hope at the end, and I'm so glad if you have found some and are starting to move on. I think your title is good but if you want some other options maybe 'Freedom in raindrops' or something. Keep it up xxx

Wonderful poem, truly loved it, It flowed beautifully. I especially liked the last stanza,

"The rain cleansed me
Made me new
Helped me understand
I don’t need you"

Love that, I can't even think of words to describe this poem really, other than magnificent. Keep it up. By the way, thank you so very much for commenting on my poem, means ever so much to me. And thanks for adding my name to your profile, that is so touching. Well if I have time I will check out some more stuff. ;)

Kalika

P.S. I love the song "The Tempest" I'm assuming you have heard it aswell.

Kalika

great poem! i can see why it has a 5/5! wonderful job!

~PLP~ lil slam~