That's so beautiful! I am somewhat speechless...>.< Keep it up. Check out some of my poems, they mean a lot to me. PeaCE

Wow. That is really good. The second to last stanza was a *little* awkward. But overall, wow. I'm in awe. You've got talent.

Oh, wow. Your other poem was good, but this is freaking amazing. I love it so much!

I love every single verse, with no exception. This is a great poem. I'm adding you to my favorites :)

~Scarlett