Aww hunh, don't be sad. Wateva life throws at you you can get through it coz by the sounds of some of your other poems you have a bunch of great mates. ltp xx

awesome imagery. very good poem. quite vague but still strong if you get what i mean.

-ellie

great stuff! sorry took so long to coment but never shows me when uve written a new one! lol great work as ever
take care luvi
xxxLoUxxx

a new perfect day in this dark hell
neglecting each and every last fact
wishing, pleading for so called normality
or at least for the good times back

Brilliant, just brilliant! That verse in particular was great. I can relate in so many ways...i just wish i could take it away for you. *hugs* xxxxx