Comments : WHEN YOU ARE DEAD...

  • 18 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    omg.. this is so sad.. keep it up hun.. u got a knack for poetry...

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    u guys makws me happy when u say that ..thanx so much ... i'm gonna keep it up !!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~VaMpIrE KiSsEs~

    Hey!
    Very good! Lot of emotion! Keep up the good work! I wanna see more poems gurl! Keep in touch and I'll keep checkin back with ur poems! 5/5!

    ~*Mya*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    I like it...it works. mm...bunny. I mean carrot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    lol..thanx

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Hehe..cool