Comments : Upon your shelf

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    That was realy great, I like your style of poetry, I'm very impressed! Keep it up, stay strong
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  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Your visuals are magnificent, and this accompanied gore and morose in all of your poems exerts a live misery of your own...for only the author can paint a picture as acute of such somnolence.
    This one is a great achievement to your library
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  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    This is so unique and it moved me a lot. At first I couldn't realte to the shelf, but yet I think it fits perfectly to the whole poem. Espacially the third stanza is my fave one, I like your melodramatic style of writing, so keep it up.

    Bye, Sabine