Beautiful write...completely magnificent...I totally get this...deep and powerful and it paints a clear picture...

Ona personl note, DON'T YOU EVER TAKE A CHUNK OUT OF YOUR ARM! I am about to start crying soon if I don't control myself....I love you Logan, with all my heart and soooo much more...please don't ever do this, and please don't ever leave me...I don't want to lose you to death, to some keeper of a bunch of metal sticks, to hell, to anything or anyone, i love you, and i want you to be here forever...I love you...please don't ever give up...not today, not tomorrow, not ever...<3 i love you...im always here for you xxxxx <33 don't forget it xx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

A nice poem with strong words! The last sentence was very good, as always, just like the rest of the poem. A good story, not too original though. :)