Comments : Sleep

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    <3 I know thissssss. This is like meee, well, except the last two stanzas, that threw me off a little. <3 But the majority is like me =) I love it. You're sooosoosososossososoos amazing. I bet a lot of people agree with me too. <3 I love you baby, you're perfect..I wish I could lie with you in your bed, maybe I could help you to sleep, or maybe we'd just be awake all night, who knows, who cares, I'd be with you, that would be all that matters to me. I love you <3 xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

    actually, i do care =P, I'd probably be like all nahhy and be like "logan! you need to sleep, get some sleep!" hehe <3 i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    I hate when this happens very good poem!

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Pianist

    True... I have often tried to describe the moments in which I am subconscious... yet the difficulty remains. You did a fair job of it. Read some of my work if you find the time.