alec,
thanks for telling me what u really think. well you see this poem is definitly not that good, but i wrote it to portray my life...and i know it might be dull for someone who doesn't know me..but i was hoping people would understand it in their own way. thanks for reading and commenting,
satuxxa

Very sad, and awesome rhyming.....how did you think of that many "ide" sounding words??? I like it

Okay nobody seems to understand this poem. It has to do with leaving behind everything...and yet never getting to the place you were searching for. You find the doorstep yet you must stay there.

I loved the way this poem flowed. Very nice-- Excellent as always:) I think I will add you to my favorites:)