Hey baby this is great...
I really enjoyed this bit
"little by little
slice by slice,
slowly alone
i ended my life"
It gave it so much reality... your a talented writer.. love ya xxx

Very strongly written. I love how the words kinda swim together. It's a really good poem. Jordan-Paige

Very strongly written. I love how the words kinda swim together. It's a really good poem. Jordan-Paige

Nice!! This poem is awesome! Seems so real...Nice Job!