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  • 18 years ago

    by jescelle

    great poem hunie i love you!!!!
    jescelle

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    hye thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    brilliant emotion filled poem hun. if i could take the pain from you i would, if you need to talk im here, always

    luv lu -x-x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant poem but so sad...please try and resist the temptation, please try n stay strong. I kno im crap at helping but i'll be there for you if you need me xxxxx i love your poetry

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemma

    Hey hun, think wat u have to live for now that u have sum1 to hold.
    Em xx

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    thank you again