repetition in this one worked well. the line

Close the door cause you think i don't need you,
As i silently weep,

didnt flow as well, but not sure how to change it and still keep the same meaning. apart from that fab ell, always here, lucy lu -x-x-x-

Absolutely fantastic!!!! This one is one of your best recent writes. I love the style that you use. Maybe a bit more imagery needed to really grip you, other than that, brilliant. xxxxxx i hope you are ok, and i am still here for you xxxx

No-one will close the door on you if you let them know u need them. And if they do then my door will always be open to you hun.
Em xx

thankyou so much