that's true. Nice write. >3jess

Good poem. i like this one alot because it describes what i feel right now about some guy... the truth does hurt.

Wow! this is awesome.
and i feel the same way...about my ex...it sucks.
5/5
lauren

This is as true as it get :)... We all feel the same way when we lose that first love... 5.5 Great job :P
Take CAre , beautifuldisaster

Wow your really good that's kinda how i feel but u probly all ready figured that out by my poems IM me if u want Littledemey.

Hey, this is good. Short, but alot of emotion in the few lines.

Excelent poem and thanks for commenting me too :)

Awesome!! It's really deep and people can relate to this too...5/5

I agree with this so muchh .. but about a guy not a girl. good jobb [=

I feel so sorry if these things happen to you, but you're bold because you are letting others know how it all went down. that real.

Bethany

I love it
this is how im feeling right now
and i think just about everyone at some point in time will experiece this too
great poem 5/5
~shell~