Sooo sad hunnie! I know how you feel cause I can relate to this a lot! Keep up the great poems!
Love alwayz......
Haily
XOXOXOXOX

this is so sad.... I do like your writing but I think you should try to find different words for words like "sad" and what not, it will really bring out your poems.
take care

that was pretty good considering that you're young. you've got a lot of talent.

great, and i know i say you shouldn't listen to others but i also do but if you loved him it could have overcome anything but good poem4*

awww. that was sweet at the end and was very tru and real 5/5

pretty good not your best. it was good at first but disconnected a bit towards the end.
~Freak~