Hey well done your on the front page!
Brillaint poem hun, really sad, hope everything is ok.
I'll check out some more of your poems when i have time
take care
serenity
xoxo

this was really good.. ive heard somethign like it before but it was good.

Hey..well i wrote a poem very simular to this one.and But the last line was "Thats when i rwalise.Im not the only lonely girl." hehe well its something like that.This poem was very emotional.Just like how i feel inside.Each time i cut myself.I know sayinh "hope things get betterR" wont really help.But did you write this poem because its from the heart?Or did you just write it from imagenations or w/e is around you that your seeing?I wrote mine personally because its how im feeling.Thidpoem really inspires me.Theres more to life.Think about your goal.I dont have anyone that could truely care about me. But school is what i think about most now.my top priority!anyways imma bounce take kare buh bye xox

you had it then you lost it towards the middle but then up picked it up again at the very end. nicely written. try making the rhyming in the middle work maybe
~Freak~

That was a great poem im sorry for what has happened to you to like make you sad and cut but hey whatever gets you through life your really talented i loved it keep me coming

This is so sad idk wat to say