OMG how awful...

I like the poem, but it shocks me that this actually happens in the world today...

But Congrats, I don't know whether this actually happened to you, but I hope anyone else reading this, who has had this experience or is suffering with this abusive behaviour speaks up...

This abuse can't continue

this poem almsot made me cry reeli sad an awful botu wat happens u kno how to write ur poems

oh my goodness! what a great poem!! I wanted to cry! It was so real! And scary. I think you are really talented! This poem is outstanding! I hope you have the best of luck in life! I am putting you down as one of my favorites. I hope to read more of your poems later. Love you.
Always,
Brittany

Wow. That was REALLY good!

omg! u should become a pro. writer or sumthing cuz your are really REALLY good!!! omg i cant wiat to see what your gonna write next

take a loook at my poems sumtime.. i need some advice!

Oh- My- God- that was like a really good poem. I hope that didnt really happen to you? Or i hope you didnt see it happen?! That is a way sad poem but its really really good. 5/5

This poem is really amazing you really have a great talent!!!!!
UNO
Bella Vata

That was an excelent poem, this is Mz. Irresitible... GOOD JOB

Wow, that is so emotional. I am so sorry for what happened makes me want to break down. You are very brave. Stay strong. Excellent write. >3jess

I am speechless. This poem was... so incredible, words can't describe. It made me cry. It was absolutley... incredible.
Jordan-Paige

Brilliant. 5/5

Wow, this was great. I have been thru the same thing. I'd love to share my stuff with if you'd like to read it.
Email me at daydreamergirl77@yahoo.com

This is a really good poem is it true i hope not if so im sorry and i hope you get through it stay strong
~!~!*!KIRSTEN!*!~!~

I completly love this! I think it's the best abuse poem I've read yet, I'm not even lying, this is really great.
5/5 I'm adding you to my favorites..

Wow, god i really hope thta wasnt real and if it was i really know how you feel. I know a lot of times when something bad happens and people say that they can relate to what you are going through you know that they dont or didnt feel as horible as you did/do but really i swar i know what that kinda stuff feels like and i would say more but anyone could see what i am sayng so i will just stop now. If you ever want to talk about it then just go on a chat with me one time.
my aimaddress is miniloulou24
see ya later

Wow i was really moved by this. It's really good and you as the writer are professional! I'm realy sorry if this is true, and it seems like it is because to me this poem comes from the heart.

That was wonderful wow.I'm really touched I felt like I was watching it actually happen, i hope you write more poems so I can read them.

wow that poem put shivers up my spine, i wanted to cry, if this happned to you, u dont deserve it, i hope you stay strong
great poem!
5/5
xox Bam

That was an excelent poem! I sencerely hope that didn't happen but more in likely did. I just wonder what goes through mans head when they look at a girl or woman. Why would God create a sinful creature as a rapist? Only he knows I guess.

this is such a sad poem but and exclent write...these type of people how do this should be locked up for ever...it brought a tear to my eye...5.5
*rissa*